Ok wow I am on the new tumblr app but for College Prep English we had to use 100-150 words to write about a topic of our choice so was this a horrible thing to write about or..? Hahaha.
I say this as respectfully as possible: having been an AP Teacher’s TA for two years in high school, I was underwhelmed by the number of essays championing the writers’ dynamic personalities and the authors’ resulting inability to articulate the nuances of said character. The instances of your writing that come to mind tend to be more concise, so you might try to establish and then expand on your thesis.
I’ve followed your blog for a while now, and frankly, I find your audacity charming. Your teacher probably will too.